(fragment for thought)
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(fragment for thought)
The vocal melody for this owes a lot to "Miracle Man" and "Radio Soul"
"(fragment for thought)"
. copyright kevin scampoli 2004
(sequence the first)
He hastily stamps his letter shut with the candle wax of depression.
"If he could, he would sing it. But, he sounds like an imitation..."
Immaturity reserved for immaturity.
"... on second thought, you're a joke."
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
(sequence the third)
When left home alone, he locks all of his doors, and he snorts until he hears rainbows.
After searching his entire life for a punch line, he's accepted the universe is endless.
Immaturity reserved for immaturity.
"... on second thought, you're a joke."
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
(sequence the second)
Upon hearing the doorbell he jumps in a seismic fright.
After signing for the letter that he sent himself, he contemplated his station in life.
Immaturity reserved for immaturity, and without the benefit of hindsight.
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
"(fragment for thought)"
. copyright kevin scampoli 2004
(sequence the first)
He hastily stamps his letter shut with the candle wax of depression.
"If he could, he would sing it. But, he sounds like an imitation..."
Immaturity reserved for immaturity.
"... on second thought, you're a joke."
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
(sequence the third)
When left home alone, he locks all of his doors, and he snorts until he hears rainbows.
After searching his entire life for a punch line, he's accepted the universe is endless.
Immaturity reserved for immaturity.
"... on second thought, you're a joke."
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
(sequence the second)
Upon hearing the doorbell he jumps in a seismic fright.
After signing for the letter that he sent himself, he contemplated his station in life.
Immaturity reserved for immaturity, and without the benefit of hindsight.
Like a bad taste in my mouth, I'll brush you away with my tool to fix musical hygeine.
It's all in the hook.
'Cause when you hook 'em, then you got 'em, now all you gotta do it fuck 'em, it's all in the hook.
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WHAR, I sincerely found it confusing, but, yeah, sometimes it helps when the author gives a bit of further insight. So what's your side of it then?wehitandrun wrote:Well, when I get home today I'll give you my side of it.
And Bamboo, just because you dont get it, doesnt mean it doesnt make sense. See, thats why you didnt write it, mah man.
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You can now hear this and the others at http://www.purevolume.com/theflamesoftroy
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Listened to the cuts. Not trying to be rude, but are they supposed to be off key? Seriously, if that's what you're going for, then that's fine. I mean if they're supposed to be sort of random bits of guitar with off key warbling, then well done. But if not. Erm...
just like a million more all over the world
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yes, but is it supposed to be off key demos cut from a bedroom? i genuinely want to know if you meant to sing atonally or not. there's no discernable melody and then the occassional warble. i like abstract stuff when it's well done so i thought i might see if that's what you were going for. either way i don't think i'd be so quick to criticize other singers if i were you.
just like a million more all over the world